This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, NZ, through to Tamaki College.
Thursday 28 May 2015
Make a Hungry Hen
Thursday 21 May 2015
Wednesday 20 May 2015
Monday 18 May 2015
Tuesday 12 May 2015
Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space
This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence.
He spends his time cooking, clean make his bed. He always is going for a bounces space walk in the icy cold air.
Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.
A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. His body fills with terror as he realises there is nothing but space surrounding him. Another whole year to go.
He spends his time cooking, clean make his bed. He always is going for a bounces space walk in the icy cold air.
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)