Creative Paragraphs- Man In Space

This week we have been learning to rework our writing to make our paragraphs interesting for our audience. We started by writing a creative sentence about this picture. As a class we will choose Nate's sentence because we liked it the best and wrote a paragraph each to follow the chosen sentence.  

Here is the beginning of my story that starts with Nate's sentence.

A spaceman bravely walks out into the icy milky way. His body fills with terror as he realises there is nothing but space surrounding him. Another whole year to go.

He spends his time cooking, clean make  his  bed. He always is going  for a bounces space walk in the icy cold air.