Thursday, 1 December 2016

Editing a Paragraph

Walt: edit a paragraph so that it has the correct punctuation marks and makes sense

Wednesday, 30 November 2016


Walt: Use different language tools like adjectives, nouns and verbs in our writing
Identify the difference in homonyms according to the spelling and meanings

Tuesday, 29 November 2016

Translations, Reflections and Rotations

Syriah Year 6 Camp - Kawau Island

Guess what? Last week, the year 6’s were so lucky to go to Kawau Island. When we got there Peter and Erin told as some safety rules so when there’s an emergency we have to go to the volleyball court.

When that was finished we went hiking. It took forever and when we got to our destination  on the top of the hill, it was the longest walk I’d ever been on. After that I felt good about myself. But walking down the hill was the worst because it was so slippery and some of us slipped.

The first activity we did was kayaking.  We kayaked two kilometers.I kept on going into the trees.  We saw a birds on the tree above the water looking in the water to see if it could see a fish for its breakfast. When we were coming back to camp, it was raining and all of us were so so cold we got goosebumps. The waves were so big I almost fell out of my kayak.

The activities we go to do sailing, kayaking, abseiling, swimming on the pontoon with life jackets, bivouac, bruma trail, it was fun doing all the activities. The one I liked the most was the burma trail.

When Mr Somerville  said “do we want to hear the good news or bad news?” we all said “bad news!” and he said the ferry sunk and we have to stay there for another day. i didn't like that because I wanted to go home. Then he told us the good news and it was that the ferry will be here in 5 minutes I was so happy.

Walt: Write a detailed recount about our experience to Kawau Island

Monday, 28 November 2016

Solving Word Problems

Walt: solve word problems using more than one strategy
Find the important parts of a word problem and what it is asking us to do
Use part whole strategies

Monday, 7 November 2016

States of Water & How it Changes

So this week we were doing States of  Water & How it Changes I learnt a lot of things like if we don't drink  a lot of water for at least 4 or 3 day our body will die
Walt: Understand states of matterList how water changes from different states

Thursday, 3 November 2016

Writing Test

One day a family went to the bush to go hiking. By the way my name is Gwynn and i have one sister and 2 brothers there names are Emma, William and Josh and my mum name is Shaniah and my dad name is Dan. We all went hiking together and the bush was dark. We were hunger so we stopped and are the chicken sandwiches and same water to keep us dehigthgradid.

Suddenly we were and big BANG we all got a friet. It might of been a tree sayed emma. Or it could've been a rock someone thyroid. It was getting dark and we couldn't find out way out so we put the tent up and sat in it tell the morning time so we could get out mum was freaking out because we were stuck in the tent all night.

When it was morning time we got out of the tent and packet it up so we can go home and that was the end of my story they never went hiking again. And they went to go get  

Tuesday, 1 November 2016

Lost while camping

One day we went camping in the forest and we got lost. By the way my name is Shaniah and I have 2 sisters and 1 brother including me. My sisters names are and Angela KC. My brothers name is Wayne. My Mums name is Ana and my Dad's name is Jayden.

We were all feeling really Angry, Hungry and Tired. The reason why we were getting Angry, Hungry and Tired it’s because we were lost. We all had the same idea. Our idea was to put sticks on the ground and brake of a branch from a tree. That is how we know that we’ve been there. Because there were heaps of paths we needed to take. There was 5 paths we needed to take.

We had a map but the next day we looked and the map was gone. We asked each other did you take the map and everyone said no. But hours later in the afternoon Zane admitted it. He said I kick the map in the river but when he told us we were really angry with him. The only thing he said was the map was useless anyways.

But lucky we had a Flare Gun but we only had 3 rounds left. But there was 5 Flare Gun’s left. We almost got 1 each but only if there was 1 more Flare Gun.

But a few hours later we were saved from people and we never ever went back there again. But the people who saved us they went back there and they got lost just like us. But they never survived because they were Angry, Hungry and tired.

Friday, 21 October 2016

At immersion assembly

At immersion assembly it was fun because we ate and cooked pancakes and we also got to watch movies that teachers made when we were on school holidays. My favorite movies was team's 4 , 2 and 5. I liked the team 4 movie because it was funny and it has more interesting stuff in it like about eating too much lollies and could red bull give you wings. I knew that red bull could not give you wings because red bull ain't a energy drink that actually give you wings and I also knew that lollies weren’t good for kids and adults because it is not healthy and it gives as rotten teeth. I like team 5 movie because you get to know more about gas, liquid, and also solid. I really like team 2 movie because we get to check out to see which one can float and which one can sink.

Sunday, 16 October 2016

School Olympic rings

Hear is our school Olympic rings i hope we can do this again

This is how we did it

we got paper plats and put them on our head and when Mrs burtt told as to put the paper plat on our head we did it and the drone flue over our head and it look awesome



go to Pt

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

This is my solving word problems


In the holidays I went to the riverside camp it was is amazing we did a lot of activities and we sleep in these cabins there were 5 or 4 bunks. We did lots of activities like messy game in messy games there was fome baseball with slides and baby pools the baby pools where for the bases.

And a big thanking you to Sharonn, Mrs Burt, Ms Hare and Mrs moran

Messy games was the best

Pop! Froth! Fizz!: Extended Points

Tuesday, 11 October 2016


Wow! what an amazing day we did lots of science experiment. Here were 3 things like one was the little balls.two was the mentors and coke next dry ice with warm water in a bottle blows up. Three was the dry ice and water dish washing liquid. 

little balls 

two cups
measuring spoons
a stirring stick
2 TBSP hot water
1/2 teaspoon borax
1 tablespoon PVA or Elmers Glue
1 tablespoon cornflour
food colouring (optional)
Glitter (optional)

  1. In your first cup add 2 TBSP hot water and 1/2 tsp of Borax and combined until borax dissolved and set aside.
  2. In the second cup combine the glue, cornflour & food colouring.
  3. Then add 1/2 a teaspoon of the borax water mixture to the 2nd cup and mix well. The mixture will then stick to your stirring stick, remove from container and using your hands roll it firmly into a ball – Keep rolling and squeezing until you  no longer hear air bubbles. with dry ice

Coke Bottle Experiements

Sunday, 2 October 2016

This is what I did in the holidays

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Start Writing Here:  

What's you favorite holiday?

In the holidays I went to the riverside camp it was is amazing we did a lot of activities and we sleep in these cabins there were 5 or 4 bunks. We did lots of activities like messy game in messy games there was fome baseball with slides and baby pools the baby pools where for the bases.

Messy games was the best

Monday, 19 September 2016

Healthy Muscles

We learnt to keep your muscles healthy you need to eat the right foods like food that haves protein.
Eggs, fish, nuts,cheese gives you protein . I hope you liked my healthy muscles.

Thursday, 15 September 2016

Olympic Narrative

Usain Bolt was feeling upset, so he decided to take a walk. He put his headphones on and listened to Nicki Minaj best hits.

 He didn’t stop till he saw a sign that said STOP DANGER DO NOT ENTER. So he looked the other way and saw the beach.

 He walked there and sat on a chair. He took a long long nap. He suddenly woke up it was late at night. His phone was 3% so he couldn't call anyone.

 So a few days later Usain Bolt was feeling sick so he didn't go out of the olympic village. Vellore adams came to see Usain Bolt and he just shut the door on her. I hope you enjoy my story.

Wednesday, 14 September 2016

Healthy Muscles

Walt: Explain and understand what muscle fatigue is
List what we can do to build healthy muscles
Find and use parts of text to accurately answer questions

Thursday, 1 September 2016


Should boost or not boost from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo

Uncle Hiwi and I go fishing

In the holidays me and uncle Hiwi went fishing on a boat. We went to this little island in the middle of nowhere. We had a break. We took food and a little cooker so we could eat.We stayed for the night on the beach”.”

In the morning we walked around the island and we found a cottage. And there was an old woman outside fishing and we started to help her. The rod was getting  heavier so we all held the rod . Together we  realised that had caught a humongous fish. My uncle Hiwi  side put it back in the water it might have babies”. I said take it home and eat” uncle Hiwi  told me about what minstrel told him. I said “ok”.

Wednesday, 24 August 2016


Do you know much about gymnastics Rhythmic ? It’s an Olympic Sport.It started in 1984.

In Gymnastics there are two categories they are  artistic and rhythmic i’m focusing on rhythmic. In rhythmic there are 5 groups or more you have to look flawless. For you perform.  they perform  beam, floor routines, vault, bars and tricks.
beam is along bar  that stands on two legs. There is a Floor routines, balls, clubs, ribbons and hoops. Women are only allowed to compete in rhythmic gymnastics.

Go to this site to find out more about gymnastics and more Olympic sports.

Monday, 15 August 2016

becoming a New Zealand citizen

How do you be a New Zealand citizen:

obey the laws
register to vote
pay tax
be a responsible New Zealander.

Wednesday, 10 August 2016


Countries that host the Olympics must show they have capacity space to hold the games and invest their own money into them. Through the influx of tourists the hosting country hope to gain more money during the Olympics. Ultimately the IOC decide which country gets to host them.

In 2012, the Olympics were held in London, United Kingdom. It was the third time London had hosted the games, the Olympics were hold there in 1908 and 1948. One of the upset games was in shot put, Valerie Adams claimed the gold medal only after it was found that her Belorussian opponent had tested positive for drugs.  

Tuesday, 9 August 2016

NZ Olympian

The New Zealand Flag

My Holidays

In the first day of week of school we had school holiday I stayed home all day. I was playing on my Ipad with my brother. My brother and I had to share it. We were playing Mine craft. You have to survive crafting, kill skeletons and spiders and they updated the app. So go and downloaded the app because it fun and cool so go and downloaded it.

Wednesday, 3 August 2016

Olympic games

The 2008 Olympic were held in Beijing, China. It was the first time woman could compete in boxing. Woman from Brunei, Qatar and Saudi Arabia were allowed to participate. This was consisted a big deal because woman in these country's are not equal with men. The games in china were one of the most expensive Olympics in historyImage result for olympic rings 

Tuesday, 2 August 2016

Olympic History

Hook: Do you know about the ancient Olympic game?
It started at 776 BC in Olympia. There was one event it was 200 yard dash. It was only for men to compete in the nude the religious festival was held for the god Zeus was held every four years.  

In 391 AD Rome invaded Greece. Two years later the Olympics games were abolished. In 1896 a French men re-started the Modern Olympic games four years later  in 1900 women were allowed to compete. and the still are competing. There was nine games it was tennis, swimming , cycling, and others.         

This year the Olympics are held in Rio Brazil. The player I  support is Valerie Adams

Friday, 1 July 2016

Super hero

syriah comic move from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

My move is superwomen as a job a comic is going to hit the city.  This term we are doing comic art .

Monday, 27 June 2016


WALT:  listen, remember to what we hear punctuate our paragraph

Last night mum made us  spaghetti for dinner mm yum mum makes the best meat balls in the word my my sister remark. Eat  lots of spaghetti hahaha!" I laugh as my brother spilled sauce all over his white shirt. 

Tuesday, 14 June 2016


Walt: identify where marks go in our 

puliilp  ask" mum are we going to the moves today? it was the holidays after all. first you need to tide your room and help put the dishes away. and then we can go replied mum pulp worked liked crazy getting his room clean and help mum put the dishes. this is going to be the best day said puiliilup brest out with exsitmet


Tuesday, 31 May 2016

Describing spiderman

Peter Parker was been bitten  by a highly enhanced spiders. 
Spider man superpower  includes agility, strength, spider senses,scale buildings .

Spider man wares a costume with a masks because his secret identity with great power comes great responsibility.

Thursday, 26 May 2016

personification dictogloss

the moon dances athe oceans if on a spot ligth stage. the tig old shoes fet lo at the back of the closet  . the self phone  alame semed and holed at me .


Friday, 6 May 2016


In the holidays I watch to the movies with my aunty. We watched Kung Fu panda 3. I liked the part when all the pandas rolled down the mountain but kung fu panda doesn't know how to do it. The next week I when to my brother Zane’s rugby game at Ellerslie Eagles. He plays in the under 9 with my family his team win by 48to 40 points. And we to pools two times.

Multiplcation word prablems


Thursday, 5 May 2016

Watch this Space

  1. Explain what a mural is ?  is a large concrete wall with panting
  2. Why had concrete walls been built?  To hold back crumbling banks
  3. Why were there lots of drawings of water by the children? Because the Harbour is on the other side
  4. What was the purpose of the mural?  A mural is any piece of artwork painted or applied directly on a wall

Tuesday, 3 May 2016

Monday, 14 March 2016

Captain Morgan addins was a tyrant. A pirate bent on causing may heaven havice across the seven seas. But also an enemy of british empire. Along with his crew they had broughten smaller ships this will change with curst treasure of baby james loved it.

Monday, 29 February 2016

1). Bobbi has 18 toy cars. His uncle gives 20 more toy cars for his birthday. How many toy cars does Bobbi have now? 38

2). Jasmyne baked 24 cupcakes. Her sister made 18 more. How many cupcakes are there altogether? 46

3). Richard has $27 in his bank account. He banks another $35. What is the balance of his account now?59

4). Shelley has $52 in her bank account. She bought a new pair of shoes for $28. How much money does she have left? 80