Tuesday 23 September 2014

The cross country

We gathered together on the concrete and waited patiently for the races to begin under the blazing sun. All around me I noticed silly wigs and amusing costumes in the colours of the rainbow.

All the house captain were cheer the year 4 girls on to the field when I hear the clipper All around me I noticed my house captains leading the cheers everyone joining in the cheers.

I flew across the start line when I heard I came first I saw easter



 

Thursday 11 September 2014

goldlocs and the three bears

l have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.


one sunny day I was playing on my sewing and then I went to pick up my tette bear and I was a pink rabbit popping then I went out of the gaet then I notce that I was lost in the black black forest then I sar a red ballon   same  porega   I taste  the big  it was to hot  I move  over  I  taste  the  medium  size  it was to gowe  then I  went to the little  it was good for me  the I  went to the

The Three Bears - Project