Thursday 11 September 2014

goldlocs and the three bears

l have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.


one sunny day I was playing on my sewing and then I went to pick up my tette bear and I was a pink rabbit popping then I went out of the gaet then I notce that I was lost in the black black forest then I sar a red ballon   same  porega   I taste  the big  it was to hot  I move  over  I  taste  the  medium  size  it was to gowe  then I  went to the little  it was good for me  the I  went to the

The Three Bears - Project


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